That final scene is one of the original "moments" this story came into being around. It's always fun when I get to release a chapter that has one. a couple more coming soon, we're getting into the meat of this story
I appreciate that. One thing I am definitely self-conscious of in my prose is, what I perceive as, a lack of “killer lines”. Don’t take this response as a call to start hunting for them. I appreciate the shout-out. That line was an organic response to character actions that differed from my plan for the chapter. Glad you liked it, I dug it the moment I wrote it.
That final scene is one of the original "moments" this story came into being around. It's always fun when I get to release a chapter that has one. a couple more coming soon, we're getting into the meat of this story
I enjoyed the wisdom and woe in this chapter, and the simple truths. One line stuck out: "See it, remember it, make sense of it when you can.”
A fine recipe for managing what life throws at you.
I appreciate that. One thing I am definitely self-conscious of in my prose is, what I perceive as, a lack of “killer lines”. Don’t take this response as a call to start hunting for them. I appreciate the shout-out. That line was an organic response to character actions that differed from my plan for the chapter. Glad you liked it, I dug it the moment I wrote it.
“Why can’t they just say they love each other?” I loved this. So simple and true.
It's one of those things I just want yo scream at everyone. Motherfuckers! Just say you live the ones you love! Make sure they know!