haha, yeah. It was good, I'm excited to see what comes next. Beylem is kinda harsh, I am not sure what to make of Zayaf, and it was good to see Mebre actually doing things, I am looking forward to seeing more of her development.
one question I had though. I'm seeing the neighborhood names (Hyr blah blah) does that mean that these places are in the city or are they like suburbs or something?
Can't wait to read this!
welll, did you?
haha, yeah. It was good, I'm excited to see what comes next. Beylem is kinda harsh, I am not sure what to make of Zayaf, and it was good to see Mebre actually doing things, I am looking forward to seeing more of her development.
one question I had though. I'm seeing the neighborhood names (Hyr blah blah) does that mean that these places are in the city or are they like suburbs or something?
So interesting... waiting for the next part... subbed!
what did you like about this chapter?
You wrote in such a beautiful way I can see and feel all the characters!
Thank you! I really struggle knowing how much physical description to include. It's encouraging to know you were able to feel it
Missing stars? I'm intrigued.
Thanks, I am pretty happy with that little detail. Something's just a little off... cosmically.
definitely makes me curious to get into chapter 3